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2008年1月9日 星期三

A6310 SectionA 49482012 陳亭縈 Speech Plan No.3

Persuasive Speech                   Section A   49482012    陳亭縈
Speech Title: Bottled Water-Pure Drink or Pure Hype?
Adaptation Plan
Audience Attitude:
I interviewed ten people in my class, including 5 males and 5 females to understand their shopping habit in bottled water. Over half of them considered that bottled water was expensive, but they would still purchase plastic bottle water. Most of them revealed that they had no ideas about the waste of plastic bottle, and they'd never thought of the problem that bottled water required large expenditure economically and environmentally.
 
Reasons:
According to the sources, I find that three reasons that we should reduce the number of purchasing bottled water are that the cost of manufacturing, delivering, and recycling bottled water is extremely high, that bottled water contains part of tap water, and that bottled water is not indeed safe, pure, and healthy as its commercial says.
 
Selecting an Organization to Meet Audience Needs:
Most of my audience takes purchasing bottled water for granted, and the audience is not aware of the harming that caused by bottled water. So I will use a logical reason approach to convince my audience that they should reduce purchasing bottled water.
 
Outline
Speech Goal:
I want to convince members of my audience that they should avoid and reduce purchasing bottled water if they have the other choice of tap water.
 
Introduction
I.         More and more people prefer to drink bottled water, instead of tap water.
II.      The global bottled water consumption is getting larger and larger.
A.     Bottled water is the best seller among other beverage, including coffee, tea, and carbonated soft drinks.
B.     In 2000 and 2006, the United States is the biggest bottled water consumer among other countries, although the United States has good and safe municipal sources of tap water.
 
Thesis Statement:
There are three reasons for not purchasing bottled water: it cost much in manufacturing, delivery, and recycling, part of bottled water is from tap water, and bottled water will also harm people's health.
 
Body
I.         Compared with municipal water, the cost of bottled water is extremely high.
A.     The plastic bottles are made from fossil fuels.
1.      In the U.S., annually manufacturing 29 billion plastic bottles used for water requires the equivalent of more than 17 million barrel of crude oil.
B.     The bottled water is delivered within long distance, which has wasted much oil.
1.      It would cost much when the products of bottled water are from foreign countries.
2.      While the delivery of tap water costs less than a penny a gallon, bottled water costs several dollars a gallon.
    C. There are 86 percent of used water bottles in the U.S. which is not recycled.
II.      Part of the bottled water is from municipal water, and with added mineral or vitamin.
A. The price of bottled water per gallon is much more expensive than the price of tap water per gallon.
A.     The big company, PEPSI and Coke agree to reveal sources of the bottled water products, and nearly 24% of the bottled water is from tap water.
B. Some products of bottled water stress on specialty water which may harm people's bodies if taking too much.
III.    Bottled water will also harm our health, and it's not as safe, pure, and healthy as what its commercial promised.
A.     The material of plastic bottles is PET (聚對苯二甲酸乙二醇酯) which is extract from crude oil.
B.     The chemical composition will produce toxic molecule while being exposure to sun for a long time.
 
Conclusion
I.         People can bring there own containers which can be used in many times, instead of buying bottled water with plastic containers.
II.      The resources we saved can be used in improving the municipal water systems of many poor countries.
 
Sources:

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A6310 SectionA 49482036 周彙捷 Speech Plan No.3

Speech Topic: Have ONE child at least! 

 

Audience Adaptation Plan

Audience attitude

People in the present age usually don't want to have children after marriage because of many reasons.

Reasons

Without having children, out society will face a series of unprecedented crises in the future. Therefore, I want to show the crises to the audience and let them know how terrible if people don't have children.

Selecting an organization to meet audience needs

First, I will explain why recent people don't want to have children. Second, I will elaborate the crises we may confront in many different aspects. Third, I will gave several advantages of having children to convince the audience.

 

Speech Outline

Speech Goal

I want to convince my audience to have children after marriage in the future.

Introduction

Nowadays, more and more people don't want to have children after marriage, which results that the birth rate becomes lower and lower year by year. There are four reasons:

  1. The level of education is commonly raised. People with high-level education will consider more aspects of having children very carefully, and then they may give up having children in account of thinking too much. Besides, they often care more about their personal achievements than other things.

2. Traditional concept of family has changed.  Marriage and children are not necessary in people's lives any more.

3. Recent people have more self-awareness: they don't want to be limited or restrained by children.

4. Because of economical depression and inflation, people have very heavy economical pressure.

Thesis Statement

Having children has many benefits; on the contrary, if you don't have children, there are many terrible crises.

Body

I.                    What crisis will be made without having children?

A. Social crisis

a. The reduction of manpower

b. The young generation has a heavy burden to raise their parents

c. Many unnecessary employers are forced to retire early.

B. Economic crisis

a. It causes the shortage of working force

  b. The market of consumption is withering

  c. The industries about children confront strikes, and may close down.

C. Educational crisis

                a. Schools in the remote areas are forced to close down.

  b. Since the need for teachers decreases heavily, there are many students who graduates from normal school can not find the job.

D. Family crisis

               a. Without the responsibility for children, couples divorces easily. Therefore, the divorce rate increases.

b. Without a child, who can you leave the heritage for? Your neighbor?

    II. Children are the sweet burden. There are many advantages of having children.

A. The child can carry on the family

a. Producing a new generation is the instinct of beings, or the human race will be extinct!

B. You will not be a lonely old man

a. After getting old, your child will feed you, accompany you and take care of you.

 

C. Having children makes the family complete.

  a. The new member makes your family livelier.

  b. The children can bond the relationship between the husband and the wife

c. The parents will obtain self-fulfillment from the processes of raising children.

D. Positive effects in your life

a. You will be trained to deal with many unexpected challenges.

b. Your responsibility is built up by raising children.

 

 

Conclusion

Children are lovely and sweet. Their lives are given by you just like your parents create you.  Do not give up experiencing the wonderful processes of having children. Therefore, have one child at least in your future life.

 

Sources

1. http://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com/

2. http://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%B0%91%E5%AD%90%E5%8C%96

3. http://a2z.fhl.net/paper/paper182.html

4. http://blog.sina.com.tw/lorenz/article.php?pbgid=4084&entryid=571923

 


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A6310 Section A 49482007 吳芷婷 Speech Plan No. 3

Persuasive speech
Speech title: Organ Donation
 
Audience Adaptation Plan
1. Audience attitude: Most audiences know that organ donation is a good deed and they will vote for it. But they are deeply affected by Chinese tradition culture so they might have bias against organ donation that they do not want to take action by themselves. Therefore, I will tell the audiences how organ donation can do to those suffered to convince them that organ donation is not a taboo but a method to help others.
2. Reasons: I will provide three reasons that I think they can moved the audience. I want them know that organ donation not only related to one person only but related to the family of the patient and even the society. Although the audiences may not take action right away, I hope the audience can rethink of organ donation.
3. Selecting an organization to meet audience needs: First I will mention the reasons why people do not want to donate their organs. Second, I will give the audiences three factors to explain the myths of organ donation and put stress on why should we donate our organs after dying. Finally, I will reaffirm the importance of organ donation and claim that the audiences to rethink of organ donation.
 
Speech Outline
Speech Goal: I want my audiences to know more about organ donation and help them to get rid of the myths of organ donation.
Introduction
I.                    What can we do after we died? If we still can help others even though we no longer exist in this world?
II.                 We can help others by donating our organs although we are dead. But there are some conceptions in Chinese culture to prevent people from organ donation.
III.              People have different attitude toward organ donation.
Thesis Statement: To persuade people agree with organ donation, there are three reasons for people to vote for organ donation: saving those patients' life, prolonging life and ease the bereaved's sorrow and empathy to other people.
Body
I.                    We can save those who are in need by giving then our organs.
1.         A person's death will affect other people's life in many ways.
2.         There are more than seven thousand patients waiting for organ transplant while only one hundred and fifty people donated their organs last year.
3.         We not only save one people but we also save the whole family.
II.                 Donating organs can prolong the dead's life and also ease the sorrow of the dead's family.
  1. Chinese traditional conceptions are obstacles for organ donation.
  2. We shouldn't just let our organs be burned to ashes or buried under the ground instead of using them to save more lives.
  3. The dead's life can be prolonged and their families' sorrow can be consoled by organ donation.
III.              Empathy is the best policy.
1.           Imagine you are the family member of the patient, how's your feeling and what will you do?
2.           As long as we are in other people's shoes, we may understand how their feelings and rethink of organ donation.
 
Conclusion: Although I have mentioned so many reasons to vote for organ donation, some conceptions are still hard to e changed. If the audiences can realize more about organ donation and rethink of it, they might agree to donate their organs to help those who are in need in the future. And we can live a worthy life because of organ donation.
 

Section A 49482046 張智瑋 Speech Plan3

l          Persuasive speech – No more bamboo chopsticks( 衛生筷)

 

Audience Adaptation Plan

 

1. Audience attitude:
People today use bamboo chopsticks very often. Because of convenience, they use these hazard products regardless of the danger which might be brought to health.

2. Reasons:
I think bamboo chopsticks do no good to our body, and the danger really concerns me. I hope I can make some effort by giving the speech to my audience and change their attitude.

3. Selecting an organization to meet audience needs:
I will use logical arguments form sign to meet audience needs. By showing the way of producing bamboo chopsticks, including what chemistry they use during the process and the harms these chemistries bring to human body, I would persuade my audience not to use bamboo chopsticks step by step.

 

 

Outline

 

Speech goal:

I want to convince my audience that they should stop using bamboo chopsticks.

 

Introduction:

We Chinese use chopsticks everyday. We use our own chopsticks at home. But when we are not at home, we eat by using bamboo chopsticks. But bamboo chopsticks may harm our health.

 

Thesis Statement:

We should not use bamboo chopsticks for they are harmful to our body.

 

Body:

I. We Chinese use chopsticks everyday. When we are not at home, we eat by using bamboo chopsticks provided by the food stand owners, so that we consumers don't worry about how to eat. It's very convenient for us who do not usually eat at home.

 

II. Workers use some chemistry when producing the chopsticks.

 

A.  Sulfur( 硫磺 ): To sulfurize these bamboos. Sulfur's main feature is to be solid when the temperature goes down. If we inhale sulfur when we eat, it would flow into the respiratory passages, and cause breathing problems and damage oral mucous membrane( 口腔黏膜 ). Besides, sulfur contains heavy metals like lead( ), and mercury( ), so if we use bamboo chopsticks, we may have lead or mercury poisoning someday.

B.  Hydrogen peroxide( 雙氧水 ): The purpose is to bleach these bamboos and make the bamboo good-looking. They use it because hydrogen peroxide is so cheap and easy to get. However, it is acid, and corrodent to oral cavity, oesophagus (食道), even the whole digestive system.

 

III. The paint inside the wrapper: I know some people use to rub before they open the wrapper. This may let the paint being left on the chopsticks, and when they eat, they may eat food with paint. And if you use the bamboo chopsticks everyday, it was just like drinking the whole can of paint!

 

Conclusion: Using 衛生筷 is not 衛生 at all. So, for your own health, stop using bamboo chopsticks today.

Sources

 

http://163.29.86.1/tcepb_limit2005/04knowledge/ne_main.asp?bull_id=65 衛生筷真的衛生嗎?

http://env.people.com.cn/BIG5/6320024.html (簡體 )一次性筷子

 

A6310 SectionA 49482003 林倢如 Speech Plan No.3

Topic: Pay Love Forward
Audience Adaptation Plan
Audience analysis: I think that most of my audiences have seen the movie "Pay It Forward" and must have been touched by the actions which the main character did and the great influence he produced. Thus, I would like to tell my audiences about that we can also do the same thing like they did in the movie, paying our love to people around you and strength it to the world.
Creating and maintaining interest: In my speech, I will take myself for example, offering my own experiences which are about helping others actively to deepen my audiences' impression. Also, I will persuade them to put it into action as well.
Organization: First of all, I will introduce the main idea of my speech and how to put it into action. Secondly, I will share my three experiences of helping others and the outcomes of the events. Finally, I will make a conclusion, telling my audience to help others without any hesitation and embarrassment.
Motivation: Being inspired by the movie called "Pay It Forward", I came up with the topic of today's speech. I hope that after listening my speech today, my audiences can slow down their pace, watch people more, concern and help those who need a little warmth spread from the bottom of our real hearts.

Speech Outline
Speech goal: I want my audiences to pay love forward.
Introduction:
I.In the movie called "Pay It Forward" the social science teacher wanted his students to do an assignment- Think of an idea to change our world and put it into action!
II.The main character Triver thought of an idea which can lead the world to the more peaceful one. The concept of this idea is that starting from him, he helped three people and do not expect any return but ask them to help the other three people. From this chain effect, the influence of this action would be very extensive.
III.Triver tried to interact with the world and hoped that people can be touched by those benevolent actions. This is indeed the final aim of this assignment.
Thesis statement: My target of today's speech doesn't want you just to donate your money. In fact, I want you to concern those who need a little warmth which is spread from the bottom of our real hearts. Slow down your pace, watch people more, keep an eye on to protect them and remember that don't be hesitated to help them. Pay love forward, you can not only fix a person but also change both of your lives.

Body:
I. I observed the people who are around me need help.
II.My best friend Tiffany had a huge battle against her mother who I also knew well. And they had already sunk into the cold war for three weeks. I thought that maybe I could be the intervener to help them break the thick ice. Thus, I put Tiffany onto the top of my helping list.
a.I made a phone call to her home and had a short conversation with her mother. At the beginning I complimented her mother for a while in order to let her mother feel happy then I told her that Tiffany had already knew that it was her fault and was eager to reconcile with you but don't know how.
b.After that, I encouraged Tiffany to make a little card to her mother. Yesterday, Tiffany told me that they stopped the fire and went back to the former peace. I was glad to hear it. It means that my effort worked it out.
III.The second one who I helped with was Beverly. She is not like a dinosaur but she's been single since she was born and was worried about that no one would marry her for good. After hearing her complaints for a long time, I decided to help her make a romantic love story.
a.First, I took her to the fashion salon to have a hair cut and dye the hair and then took her to the department store, bought some cosmetics and I taught her the basic skill of make-up.
b.Then I introduced her to some of my male friends. At that night, she met a guy who she regarded as her Mr. Right. And they have kept in touch these days. So far, with my help, her love adventure has gone fluently.

IV.Have you ever felt hesitated whether to give your helping hands or not? Have you ever fled away from the harsh situation because of your embarrassment to help others? It happened to me for several times and I always felt guilty after the events.
a.Yesterday, when I came out from the MRT station, I witnessed a man who knocked down a bicycle by accident and then the row of the bicycles fell down like the dominos. At that time, I paused for a while, being hesitated to help him. At last I did nothing but just walked away. On my way toward home, I kept thinking of the event which just happened in front of me. I was regretted that I should have done my favor to help him. Although I would like to assist him, I was too shy to offer my help. If I helped her generously at that time, the third blank in my helping list would not be empty until now. After that, I made up my mind to help people without any hesitation and embarrassment.
Conclusion:
Although the things I've done were inappreciable, I helped at least two people in just four days. And I'll continue doing it. Sometimes we may be disappointed at the present situation where is filled with the tangled politics, the conflicts between different religious beliefs, economic depression and the extreme disparity between the rich and the poor. However, I still believe that there is love existing around the world.

Sources:
1. The film "Pay It Forward"
2. My own experiences
3. My brain

2008年1月8日 星期二

A6310 SectionA 49482032鍾儀 Speech Plan No.3

Topic: The Beauty of Taiwan. Have you seen?

My proposition: I want to convince my audience that traveling in Taiwan is a wonderful choice for the coming winter vacation.

Adaptation Plan

Audience analysis: The audience is a group of teenagers who look forward to the coming of winter vacation and eager to have a perfect plan for the vacation. Some of them might want to go abroad.

Background knowledge: When a long-term vacation is coming, my classmate and I are look forward to travel. However, I found most people consider traveling abroad is more attractive to them than traveling in Taiwan.

Creating and maintaining interest: First of all, I will show a governmental static about the percentage of traveling abroad and Taiwan. And then I will show them it is also interesting to stay in Taiwan by introducing them some hot spots in Taiwan. With my introduction and those vivid pictures, I believe the audience's interest will be aroused.

Organization: The organizational pattern of my speech is the statement of reasons and comparative advantages.

Building credibility: I will search some governmental static about traveling and then search lots of spectacular pictures and describe those sites vividly to enhance the beauty of Taiwan.

Motivation: The winter vacation is coming, I am one of the excited student who eager to take a trip. Many of my classmates plan to go overseas to spend their free time; however, there are also lots of people cannot go abroad. Therefore, I want to show everyone it is also wonderful to stay in Taiwan, even better.

Outline

Speech Goal: I want to persuade my audience that traveling in Taiwan is also a wonderful choice for this winter vacation.

Introduction:

I.                    A governmental static shows that more and more Taiwanese traveling abroad these years.

II.                 There are many famous hot spots in Taiwan where lots of foreigners come to visit but we Taiwanese ignore those beautiful sceneries.

III.               There are also advantages of traveling in Taiwan.

Thesis Statement: As the winter vacation is coming, many people will have plenty of choices to spend their free time. Most of them might want to travel abroad with family or friends, however, I want to convince them to stay in this beautiful island, seize this chance to be closer to our mother town.

Body:

I.                   According to a governmental traveling static, the amount of foreign visitors coming Taiwan is increasing about five percent than last year. On the other hand, the amount of Taiwanese people who traveling abroad increase about three percent. This shows that people in Taiwan seems to prefer going overseas than before.

II.                There are many hot spots in Taiwan where the foreigners eager to come but we didn't notice.

A.            Northern Taiwan: Where Ancient and Modern Coexist. Taiwan's "economic miracle" has modernized Taipei, but the city still maintains traditional lifestyles, making it a fascinating destination for visitors. (Introduction of hot spots)

B.            Central Taiwan: Cliffs, Clouds, and Cataracts. Central Taiwan displays the full range of the island's beauty: mountain lakes and shining seas, roaring rivers and steaming hot springs, lofty snow-capped peaks and lush tropical valleys, and emerald forests and craggy ravines. (Introduction of hot spots)

C.            Southern Taiwan: Bucolic Scenes from the Past. Southern Taiwan is a study in contrasts. Bustling modern cities with all the latest amenities are surrounded by the pastoral panorama of old Taiwan. (Introduction of hot spots)

D.            Eastern Taiwan: Unspoiled Natural Beauty. Eastern Taiwan has some of the island's most beautiful and accessible attractions. (Introduction of hot spots)

III.             There are many advantages of traveling in Taiwan.

A.            First of all, it can save you lots of money because you don't need to take a flight.

B.            Second, you don't have to be worry about the difficulty o f conversation.

C.            Third, it is safe to traveling in Taiwan because without the language differences you can find someone to help you whenever you need.

D.            Forth, Taiwanese are passionate and friendly, it is convenient to get information from local villagers, furthermore, you might get a free meal and make lot of friends.

Conclusion: After all, I don't think the moon abroad is brighter than Taiwan. We live here so we should not ignore the beauty of our mother town. Staying in Taiwan this winter vacation might be a wonderful decision which beyond your expectation!

Resources:

    http://taiwan.net.tw/台灣觀光資訊網

    http://admin.taiwan.net.tw/indexc.asp台灣交通部觀光局

    http://travel.network.com.tw/台灣旅遊聯盟

    http://www.travel-web.com.tw/大台灣旅遊網



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