2008年1月9日 星期三

A6310 Section B 49482035奚樂芸 Speech Plan No. 3

Persuasive speech

Speech title: Please! Stop Drinking Bubble Tea!  

Audience Adaptation Plan

1. Audience attitude:

When I asked some of my audience about their feelings towards bubble tea, I found that most of them recognize it as one of the Taiwanese famous food and most of them enjoy it. Although they don't think bubble tea is nutritious, they don't think it will actually threaten their health. Also, when I asked them about the possible disadvantages of bubble tea, no one had mentioned about the environmental pollution. As I put these data together, the majority of my audience doesn't know how bubble tea will damage themselves and the environment.   

2. Reason:

I believe that the three reasons that are most likely to convince the audience are that the ingredients in bubble tea threaten our health, that bubble tea makes us fat, and that the containers of bubble tea damage our environment.

3. Selecting an organization to meet audience needing:

Since the majority of my audience has no idea about the serious damages bubble tea may cause, I will use examples and statistics to draw their attention. Then I will illustrate the reasons logically to make them believe that they should stop dirking bubble tea.     

Speech Outline

Speech Goal

I want my audience to stop drinking bubble tea.

Introduction

I.      When your foreign friends visit Taiwan, what Taiwanese food will you treat them? It is not surprising that a cup of bubble tea list first in your mind.

II.      Bubble tea is definitely one of the most famous drinks in Taiwan. However, although bubble tea is worldwide famous, it doesn't mean that it's a good drink for us to have.

III.    Today, there are three reasons to show you, so please, stop drinking bubble tea!     

Thesis Statement

The three reasons for stop drinking bubble tea are that the ingredients in bubble tea threaten our health, that bubble tea makes us fat, and that the containers of bubble tea damage our environment.

Body

I.                     The ingredients in bubble tea threaten our health

A.     According to the Consumers' Foundation, tapioca pearls(粉圓) contains a large quantity of preservatives. When humsn body accmilates a great number of presercativs, that may cause headhache, vomiting and spasm.

B.     Cream(奶精) is made by trans fat. According to Wikpedia and Chicago Rush University, intaking trans fats will increase the risk of coronary heart disease, stroke and Alzheimer's disease.

C.     The quality of water used to make tea may not fit the qualified standard. According to public health bureau of Taoyuan county government, 36% of the bubble tea shops in Taoyuan are unqualified due to their unclean water. So there is one-third possibility for you to suffer from diarrhea by just enjoying a cup of bubble tea.

 

II.                   Bubble tea makes us fat

A.     According to the nutritionist of Mackay Memorial Hospital, per 100 c.c. bubble tea contains 56 calories which are higher than coca cola's 42 calories of same capacity.

B.     A cup of 500cc bubble tea is about 280 calories, and that equals to the calories of a bowel of rice or a McDonough cheese burger.

C.     If you drink bubble tea every day, you'll assimilate 102,200 calories which means 13.5 kilogram in a year. If you only drink once a week: you will still gain 2 kilograms in a year.

 

III.                The containers of bubble tea damage our environment.

A.     According to Environmental Protection Administration, there are at least 12 thousand bubble tea shops nowadays and the consumption of plastic and paper cups reaches to 5 million a day. 

B.     So far, there's no law that can control the bubble tea shops' usages of plastic cups and bags, for most of the shops only serve customers with take-out drinks while our laws can only restrain the shops with seats for customers to eat.

C.     Although most of the containers are recyclable, few people can actually and properly recycle these containers.

Conclusion

Since we know that drinking bubble tea will not only threaten our health, make us fat but also pollute our environment, we should stop drinking bubble tea.

Sources

1.      http://forum.rocsaut.org/topic_show.cgi?id=7465&h=1&bpg=4&age=30

2.      http://news.yam.com/bcc/healthy/200709/20070920762429.html

3.      http://enews.nctu.edu.tw/news6.php?news_id=2605

4.      http://enews.nfa.gov.tw/one-news.asp?NewsNo=6989

5.      http://www.libertytimes.com.tw/2004/new/oct/28/today-life7.htm#top

6.      http://pupu.nike.tw/read-33.html

7.      http://news.yam.com/chinatimes/society/200712/20071205025475.html

8.      http://e-info.org.tw/taxonomy/term/21022

 



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(Persuasive Speech) 49482054 林佳楠

Audience Adaptation Plan
Speech Title: Say No to Bamboo Chopsticks!
1. Audience Attitude: I asked ten people about their attitudes toward bamboo chopsticks, and all of them knew their threatening effects, but only two people did not use them in practice. As I asked them why they still use bamboo chopsticks when they were acquainted with their disadvantages, most of them considered it troublesome to carry a pair of chopsticks with them, and they though that it did not matter a great deal. Worried about this negative tendency, I determined to contrive a speech to inform my audience of the terrible truth of their harmful effects and r persuade them not to use bamboo chopsticks any more.
2. Reason: There are two reasons for us to refuse to use bamboo chopsticks. The most essential problems of bamboo chopsticks are that they profoundly increase garbage and that they contain many toxic chemical substances that will jeopardize human health.
3. Selecting an organization to meet audience needs: At first, I am going to reflect my observation about the unworried attitude of people toward bamboo chopsticks. Then I will expose the astonishingly rough process of manufacturing to impress my audience and officially empirical evidences will be cited to support my arguments. Afterwards, I enumerate several organizations that are promoting this movement so as to kindle my audience to take immediate action. I am convinced that after my presentation my audience will feel it absolutely necessary to carry a pair of chopsticks with them.
Outline
Speech Goal: I hope people can carry a pair of chopsticks with them to avoid using disposable bamboo chopsticks.
Introduction:
I. According to Environmental Protection Administration, the daily consumption of bamboo chopsticks in Taiwan reaches almost 3 million pairs, and annually consumption is beyond 1 billion pairs.
II. Only two out of ten of my interviewees carry a pair of chopsticks with them, since they consider it to be troublesome.
Thesis Statement: There are two major reasons for us to stop using bamboo chopsticks, in that they deteriorate our environment as well as human health due to their rough producing process.
Body:
I. The consumption of bamboo chopsticks is a great threaten to our environment which has raised worldwide attention.
II. The procedure of producing bamboo chopsticks is surprisingly rough.
III. There are accumulating awareness among government and industry to promote the movement of refusing bamboo chopsticks.
Conclusion: Seeing such great costs we have to pay for using bamboo chopsticks, we should take immediate action to stop using them! And most of all, instead of relying on official promotion, we must try our best to practice this habit and propaganda this movement as wide as possible.
Sources:
1. Taiwan Environment Information Center: http://e-info.org.tw/taxonomy/term/2071
Source of the pictures:
 
 
 

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A6310 SectionA 49482003 林倢如 Speech Plan No.3

Topic: Pay Love Forward
Audience Adaptation Plan
Audience analysis: I think that most of my audiences have seen the movie "Pay It Forward" and must have been touched by the actions which the main character did and the great influence he produced. Thus, I would like to tell my audiences about that we can also do the same thing like they did in the movie, paying our love to people around you and strength it to the world.
Creating and maintaining interest: In my speech, I will take myself for example, offering my own experiences which are about helping others actively to deepen my audiences' impression. Also, I will persuade them to put it into action as well.
Organization: First of all, I will introduce the main idea of my speech and how to put it into action. Secondly, I will share my three experiences of helping others and the outcomes of the events. Finally, I will make a conclusion, telling my audience to help others without any hesitation and embarrassment.
Motivation: Being inspired by the movie called "Pay It Forward", I came up with the topic of today's speech. I hope that after listening my speech today, my audiences can slow down their pace, watch people more, concern and help those who need a little warmth spread from the bottom of our real hearts.

Speech Outline
Speech goal: I want my audiences to pay love forward.
Introduction:
I.In the movie called "Pay It Forward" the social science teacher wanted his students to do an assignment- Think of an idea to change our world and put it into action!
II.The main character Triver thought of an idea which can lead the world to the more peaceful one. The concept of this idea is that starting from him, he helped three people and do not expect any return but ask them to help the other three people. From this chain effect, the influence of this action would be very extensive.
III.Triver tried to interact with the world and hoped that people can be touched by those benevolent actions. This is indeed the final aim of this assignment.
Thesis statement: My target of today's speech doesn't want you just to donate your money. In fact, I want you to concern those who need a little warmth which is spread from the bottom of our real hearts. Slow down your pace, watch people more, keep an eye on to protect them and remember that don't be hesitated to help them. Pay love forward, you can not only fix a person but also change both of your lives.

Body:
I. I observed the people who are around me need help.
II.My best friend Tiffany had a huge battle against her mother who I also knew well. And they had already sunk into the cold war for three weeks. I thought that maybe I could be the intervener to help them break the thick ice. Thus, I put Tiffany onto the top of my helping list.
a.I made a phone call to her home and had a short conversation with her mother. At the beginning I complimented her mother for a while in order to let her mother feel happy then I told her that Tiffany had already knew that it was her fault and was eager to reconcile with you but don't know how.
b.After that, I encouraged Tiffany to make a little card to her mother. Yesterday, Tiffany told me that they stopped the fire and went back to the former peace. I was glad to hear it. It means that my effort worked it out.
III.The second one who I helped with was Beverly. She is not like a dinosaur but she's been single since she was born and was worried about that no one would marry her for good. After hearing her complaints for a long time, I decided to help her make a romantic love story.
a.First, I took her to the fashion salon to have a hair cut and dye the hair and then took her to the department store, bought some cosmetics and I taught her the basic skill of make-up.
b.Then I introduced her to some of my male friends. At that night, she met a guy who she regarded as her Mr. Right. And they have kept in touch these days. So far, with my help, her love adventure has gone fluently.

IV.Have you ever felt hesitated whether to give your helping hands or not? Have you ever fled away from the harsh situation because of your embarrassment to help others? It happened to me for several times and I always felt guilty after the events.
a.Yesterday, when I came out from the MRT station, I witnessed a man who knocked down a bicycle by accident and then the row of the bicycles fell down like the dominos. At that time, I paused for a while, being hesitated to help him. At last I did nothing but just walked away. On my way toward home, I kept thinking of the event which just happened in front of me. I was regretted that I should have done my favor to help him. Although I would like to assist him, I was too shy to offer my help. If I helped her generously at that time, the third blank in my helping list would not be empty until now. After that, I made up my mind to help people without any hesitation and embarrassment.
Conclusion:
Although the things I've done were inappreciable, I helped at least two people in just four days. And I'll continue doing it. Sometimes we may be disappointed at the present situation where is filled with the tangled politics, the conflicts between different religious beliefs, economic depression and the extreme disparity between the rich and the poor. However, I still believe that there is love existing around the world.

Sources:
1. The film "Pay It Forward"
2. My own experiences
3. My brain

2008年1月8日 星期二

A6310 Section B 49282016 陳秀慧 Speech plan No.3

老師~抱歉可以幫我把上一篇刪掉嗎?
AUDIENCE ADAPTATION PLAN
AUDIENCE ATTITUDE:
        When I asked my friends that would you buy a cosmetics or household-products using animal testing, some of my friends said they would not buy it if they found the company using animal testing, but they know little about which company do or don't experiment on the animal, while the others said it is inevitable that we would buy the cosmetics or household-product whose substance are examined by means of animal testing. Actually, we have many choices nowadays. There are many companies that do not use animal testing to examine their products, and there are many methods that can help the animal out of the unnecessary suffering.
REASONS:
        I believe that my three points that the species of test animal differ from human, the animals have feelings like human and the alternative ways to substitute for animal testing can convince my audiences not to buy those companies using animal testing.
SELECTING AN ORGANIZATION TO MEET AUDIENCE NEEDS:
        In the beginning, I will ask my audience to close their eyes and feel the situation and the fear of being tested like an animal. Then I will explain why animal testing is unnecessary in most cases. Last I will tell my audience what they can do to stop unnecessary animal testing. I think that I will make my audiences know the cruel truth and they can stop these unnecessary and inhumane things.
 
OUTLINE
SPEECH GOAL:
I want to convince my audiences to boycott these cosmetics and household-product companies that use animal testing to examine their products.
INTRODUCTION:
I.            What is "Animal testing"?
II.         Please close your eyes and image you are in a cage and are going to be tie to the surgical table.
THESIS STATEMENT:
        We should boycott the cosmetics and household-product company that use unnecessary animal testing because the species of animals differ from human, they feel the same like us and there are many testing ways that can substitute for them.
 
BODY:
 
I.           Animals are lives on the earth, not the tool of human.
        A. Humans and animals both feel pain, fear, sadness, joy, love, and
             other emotions.
        B. Why should they suffer for beauty?
        C. Is the research necessary?
 
(Why animals, not human?)
 
II.        There are different species from human; it is harmful and dangerous to human.
        A. Insulin(胰島素) can make the baby of hen, rabbit and rat disabled,
             but show no influence on human body.
        B. Because of the unreliable experiment, it is possible that people
              will use harmful material on our body or neglect some material
             that are really good to us.
 
(Is there any way that can help them out, but most of the researchers just ignore it?)
 
III.     There are many alternatives nowadays.
A.     Eytex」(一種用豆類製成的物品)andSkintex」(一種用南瓜皮製成的物品)
B.    Testskin
 
IV.      What can I do to stop these?
        A. Boycott the company
        B. Send an email and tell the company why you don't buy their 
             products.
        C. The most important is to tell this cruel truth to any one you know 
            and you boycott these companies together.
 
V.         Conclusion
        We should respect all species. I believe that all the species are born to be a certain purpose but definitely not the victim of human's selfishness. Or we are just like notorious Nazi that looks down on the value of life and also depreciate our value to be a human.
 
VI.      Resource
《動物解放(Animal Liberation)》,Peter Singer孟祥森錢永祥譯。
caring consumer-a guide to kind living
Stop Animal Testing. com
關懷生命協會
AD Sneeze
Altweb: Alternatives to Animal Testing
The Humane Society of the United States
Physicians Committee for Responsible Medicine
 
 
 
 

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A6310 Section B 49482047 陳奕蓁 Speech Plan No. 3

SPEECH PLAN 3           49482047 陳奕蓁

Audience Adaptation

AUDIENCE ANALYSIS: My audience is my classmates in speech section B. I think most of them eat fruits after their meal.

BACKGROUND KNOWLEDGE: Since eating fruits after meal is a usual practice in our country, I do not expect them to know previously the harm eating fruits after meal can cause.
CREATING AND MAINTAINING INTEREST: I will use rhetorical questions to make my audience think about their own situation. Then I will point out that this usual practice can harm our body.
ORGANIZATION: I organize my speech in causation sequence.

BUILDING CREDIBILITY: I will cite from information I've found to support my argument.

MOTIVATION: I strongly recommend my audience to eat fruits after meal so they can keep healthy.

 

Outline

SPEECH GOAL: I want my audience to correct their dieting manner.

INTRODUCTION

I.        What do you usually do after having meal?

II.     How about eating fruits while watching television with your family?

III.   Has your mother ever told you that eating fruits after meal helps the function of your digestive system?

IV.  It is common to eat fruits after meal in Taiwan.

V.     Eating fruits after meal can ruin your digestive system and make you out of shape.

THESIS STATEMENT: You should eat fruits before your meal rather than after.

BODY

I.        Actually, eating fruits after meal cannot help the function of your digestive system.

A.     Digesting meal requires more time than digesting fruits.

B.     The meal will block fruits the way into your digestive system.

C.     Heat in our body will rotten your meal and fruits.

1.      The nutrition in fruits will disappear.

2.      Rotten fruits may harm your digestive system.

D.     Eating fruits after meal causes the dysfunction of your digestive system.

(Since eating fruits after meal cannot help the function of your digestive system, how about eating fruits before meal?)

II.     Eating fruits before meal not only help the function of your digestive system but help you to keep good shape.

A.     Fruits are easier to be digested than your meal.

B.     The nutrition in fruits will be absorbed completely.

C.     Fruits can help the function of your digestive system.

D.     The amount of blood sugar will increase, and you will feel full.

E.      You would not eat too much, and you may keep good shape.

(Now that you know the benefits of eating fruits before meal, how about change your lifestyle now?)

CONCLUSION

I.        For the sake of your digestive system, improve your dieting habit now.

A.     Eating fruits before your meal will not waste the money you spend on fruits.

B.     Eating fruits before your meal can lessen the burden of your digestive system.

C.     Eating fruits before your meal can save your money of going to a doctor.

D.     You will not gain weight since you consume less.

II.     For the sake of your own health, eat fruits before your meal.

SOURCES:

Myfresh 。<飯前吃水果好~ 還是飯後吃水果好呢?>。《MyFresh 新鮮生活館》。

22 Sep. 2006 29 Dec. 2007< http://www.wretch.cc/blog/myfresh>

水果為什麼飯前吃才有營養。《醫生在線 -您的私人醫生 ,中國權威的健康網

(繁體版 )》。18 Dec. 2007 29 Dec. 2007<http://big5.51daifu.com/>

新谷弘實。《不生病的生活:全美首席胃腸科醫師的健康祕訣 》。劉滌昭譯。台北:

如何,2007年。