2008年1月5日 星期六

A6310 SECTION A 49482044 張如瑩 SPEECH PLAN NO.3

Persuasive speech plan

Speech title: Keep a good stance!

 

Audience Adaptation Plan

 

1.      Audience attitude: I believe that most of my audience knows much about how to keep a good stance but they do not pay attention to it. They do not take it as a habit. A bad stance may not impact on them now, but gradually they will feel the pain that a bad stance should bring to them. My purpose is to let them know the importance of keeping a good stance.

 

2.      Reasons: I believe that the five examples that are most likely to convince my audience are keeping a good stance when sitting, standing, sleeping, moving things, and controlling weight.

3.      Selecting an organization to meet audience attitude: I have organized my speech in a way that my audience will know the importance of keeping a good stance and what will become if they have Scoliosis.

 

Speech outline

 

Speech goal: I want to convince members of audience that keeping a good stance in their daily lives is important.

 

Introduction

I.                   I believe that most of you must have heard of Scoliosis before, but do you know what may cause your spine curved like the pictures you see?

II.                In our daily lives, we sometimes feel that our waist or back are aching, but do you know the reason of that?

III.             Keeping a good stance is important because it can lead you to a healthier life.

 

Thesis statement: Keeping a bad stance would cause some bad influences; therefore, we should learn how to keep a good stance in every aspect so that we will not end in wearing braces or doing spinal surgery.

 

Body

I.                   Before learning how to keep a good stance in every aspect, we should know what Scoliosis is.

A.     First of all, we bend down to check whether our spine is straight or not.

B.     If your spine is straight, then it is normal; if it curves like a "C" or "S", then you may have the chance to have Scoliosis.

C.     Scoliosis may have these bad influences on your body, if you tend to keep a bad stance.

1.      Your body shapes would become abnormal and shapeless.

2.      You may often have waist ache or back ache.

3.      Scoliosis may oppress your nerves and cause other diseases.

II.                You should keep a correct stance when sitting.

A. Your back and bottom should stay close to the back of the chair.

B. You should not cross your legs when sitting.

C. You should straighten up your back and keep a good distance when playing computer.

III.    You should keep a correct stance when standing.

A. When standing, you should not hump your back.

B. When standing, you should have a balanced and upright posture.

C. You should not have rounder shoulders, sway back, or flat back.

D. Try not to wear high heels because it may cause Scoliosis.

IV.    You should try to keep a good stance when sleeping.

A. When you sleep with your face upward, try to put a small pillow under your knees.

B. When you sleep with your face downward, try to put a small pillow under your belly.

C. When you sleep with your face sided, try to bend your knees.

V.     You should keep a good stance when moving things.

A. When you want to take a heavy thing from the floor, remember to squat.

B. When you are holding a heavy thing, always straighten up you back and keep the thing close to your body.

C. When you want to take a thing from a high place, you should stand on a chair to get it.

VI.     You should try to control your weight.

A. You should not gain too much weight like the people in the pictures because your spine may not be able to support your weight.

B. Control your weight does not mean you should become very skinny.

VII.                    If you do not follow the instructions above, you may have Scoliosis.

A. If you have Scoliosis, you will have to wear braces to cure it.

B.     On the other hand, if Scoliosis becomes serious, then you will have to take the spinal surgery.

 

Conclusion: Keeping a good stance in our daily lives is important because it can prevent us from getting Scoliosis and let us have a prettier body shapes. Besides, we will not have to worry about having waist or back ache. Therefore, let us keep a good stance when doing everything.

 

Sources:

http://www.commonhealth.com.tw/article/index.jsp?page=5&id=1203

http://www.qxqc.tw/page4.html

王智偉,驚爆醫學內幕:脊椎影響你一生的健康,台北縣,世茂2002

家庭百科叢書編譯組,姿勢與健康,台北市,國家書店,70



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