2007年11月3日 星期六
2007年11月2日 星期五
孫新詠A6301 section B Speech Plan 1(revised )?=
I. Audience Adaptation
1. How relevant will the audience find this material to be?
Almost every one of they have encountered this kind of situation, and I think they may have the same, or at least similar feeling with me
2. How can I make it easier for audience members to comprehend the information I will share?
I will use some body languages, give as more examples as I could, and try my best to convey the information. Besides, I will use the words which we used everyday, so my audience will not confused about what I'm saying.
3. What common ground do audience members share with each other and with me?
All of us must face the music that our close relatives will leave us forever someday, and everyone must have some reflections about this event. So I want to share my reflection with them.
4. What can I do to enhance my credibility?
This event really happened to me before, and I will try to describe some details to enhance my credibility. Besides, I will give examples to let my audience know that I really love the meat pie as well as my grandmother. I will do my best trying to describe everything vividly.
5. What is my audience's initial attitude toward my speech topic likely to be?
I think they might think it's just another common experience sharing because I don't want to reveal that this is a sad story at first. So I introduce the meat pie first and don't want the atmosphere become too serious.
6. What language or cultural differences do audience members have with each other and with me?
Because we all live in the same country and speak the same language, I think there will be little cultural differences between us, so our attitude about death will have some similarity. Moreover, English is not our mother tongue, so I will try my best to make my audience understand me; for example, deliver the speech with simple words and explain the words (by both Chinese and English) which we seldom use.
II. Speech outline
1. Specific Goal
I will share my true feeling with my audience and let them know that "what will happen tomorrow" is not a thing we can control, so never use "I'm busy" as an excuse. I don't want them to be as regretful as I am.
2. Introduction
- A. The short introduction of meat pie.
- B. How delicious the meat pie my grandmother cooked.
How I learned a lesson from losing the special flavor of meat pie and my dear grandmother.
4. Body
- A. The memory of my grandmother around the meat pie.
- B. Why I want to learn the skill of making it and how I use some excuses to put off.
- C. After my grandmother's death and the losing of that special meat pie, I started to understand that we must do what we want right away because future is not a thing we can control.
5. Conclusion
Don't use any excuse, such as "I'm busy," to put off what we really want to do. While I lose the special meat pie, I also lose something important in my life. So I really want to share this experience with all of my classmates; I don't want them to regret themselves as I did before.
2007年10月31日 星期三
Section B 連沅程 Speech Plan No.1
1. How relevant will the audience find this material to be?
Because the audience are my classmates, they may would like to know me deeply.
2. How can I make it easier for audience members to comprehend the information I will share?
I will introduce my two characteristics to the audience. First, I will talk about why I enjoy eating? Second, I will talk about how I take my friends seriously.
3. What common ground do audience members share with each other and with me?
Maybe the audience have friends similar to me or they share the same characteristics.
4. What can I do to enhance my credibility?
I will provide my experience as an example to enhance my credibility.
5. What is my audience's initial attitude toward my speech topic likely to be?
I think my audience might be interested in my topic because they would like to know me more.
6. What language or culture differences do audience members have with each other and with me?
Because we live in the same country, I think the culture differences between us are minor. Besides, we are all English majors, so it will not be difficult for them to understand my speech as long as I speak slowly and clearly.
Speech Outline
Specific goal: I would like the audience to know I am one who loves to eat and values friends highly.
Introduction:
I. Everyone has their own nature.
II. I will talk about my two main characteristics.
Thesis statement: I am one who loves to eat and values friends highly. However, these two characteristics have a great effect upon my life.
Body:
I. I want to say how I enjoy eating.
A. My body shape has changed because of eating.
B. Examples of how much I can eat
C. My adaptability to different foods is very good. [TRANSITION?]
II. I want to say how I value my friends highly.
A. Playing the role of a bridge between friends.
B. I treat friends more importantly than family.
C. I bear that sometimes friends make fun of me.
Conclusion: Although I can not change my personality completely, I can make some changes. I should take more exercise to keep health and maintain a good shape. I should pay more attention on my family because they really care about me anytime and anywhere.
Section B洪慧珊 Plan No. 1
洪慧珊
Speech Plan No. 1
Topic:
Audience Adaptation
1. How relevant will the audience find this material to be?
Though most of my audience didn't have a chance to see my performance of playing guitar and singing, but I do know most of my audiences know I love music and singing.
2. How can I make it easier for audience members to comprehend the information I will share?
I'll take my personal experience of playing guitar as an example to help my audience understand me more.
3. What common ground do audience members share with each other and with me?
I believe that music is pretty common interest that everyone have. Thus, I choose this topic to share with my audience. Besides, I do like to sing or play my guitar in front of my classmates, so maybe some of my audience may have seen my performance before.
4. What I can do to enhance my credibility?
My performance of playing guitar and singing in daily life is definitely enough to make my audience believe that I do love playing guitar.
5. What is my audience's initial attitude toward my speech topic likely to be?
There are some of my classmates told me that they like my performance and I believe that the speech topic of mine would make them feel interested toward my later speech.
6. What language or culture differences do audience members have with each other and with me?
I think my audience can totally understand what I say. But one thing I do worry about is my nervousness. It would make my speech not easy to be understood. However, I will try hard to overcome this problem.
Speech Outline
Speech goal:
I'm going to share my experiences of learning guitar to help my audience gain more ideas about me and understand me more than ever.
A. I tried learning the guitar and gave up twice before I finally got motivated and dedicated enough to stick on.
B. My first try was a really short thing that lasted only 2 days.
C. My second try happened when I was a freshman.
D. My third successful try happened during this year.
Thesis Statement:
I want to share my experience of learning guitar with my audience.
Body:
I. I gave up learing guitar twice before I finally get dedicated enough to stick on.
A. My first try was a really short thing that lasted only 2 days, when I was much younger. My neighbor's elder brother had a guitar, and we was entranced by how cool it was to play it. We tried to learn it, but with no real mentor and lessons, we gave up pretty quickly.
II. My second try happened when I was a freshman.
It was when I met this really cool guy Jay. Actually, he's the guitar club leader. And I was impressed by his performance. That is freaking awesome! For him, I joined the guitar club. Well, he did teach me how to play guitar, and I tried my best to learn whatever I can. However, assignments came, everything piled up, so I just let my guitar lying around in your dorm, doing nothing but gathering dust.
III. My third successful try was during this year.
A. He is short, a little fat and has a plain face. But after I saw his amazing performance, I had the fire in my heart to learn to play guitar again. So I attend his guitar every week and practice guitar almost everyday.
B. The teacher doesn't focus on dry music theory - it teaches you how to get to playing well, fast.
C. Finally, my playing sounds like music, and it wasn't hard to get to that level.
IV.
A. Now, I stared to play and sing in my dorm and enjoy myself. And I really thank my roommates because they have to bear with the "noise" I make for a long time.
B. Maybe one day I would become a superstar and play my guitar on the stage.
Conclusion:
I think my ultimate purpose is not merely introduce my interest to my audience but to tell them that if we want to learn or get something, then go and get it. Sometimes it is not that hard as we imagine. So just do it!
Speech section B 林佳楠
A6310 Section B 49482053 范德政 Speech plan No. 1
2007年10月30日 星期二
A6310 Section A 49482017 謝依彣 speech plan no. 1
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徐孟瑞A6310 SectionA Speech Plan No1
Topic: My part-time job in summer vacation
I. Audience Adaptation
1. How relevant will the audience find this material to be?
I think almost everyone has the experience of taking a part-time job so they may be familiar with this topic.
2. How can I make it easier for audience members to comprehend the information I will share?
I will choose simple words instead of hard words and give some concrete steps to help the audience understand my part-time job.
3. What common ground do audience members share with each other and with me?
I consider that almost everyone has the experience of taking a part-time job.
4. What can I do to enhance my credibility?
I will give many details and steps which happened in my work to convince the audience that I really talk about my personal experience.
5. What is my audience's initial attitude toward my speech topic likely to be?
I think their initial attitude may be soft because my topic is very common.
6. What language or cultural differences do audience members have with each other and with me?
Because we all live in
II. Speech outline
1. Specific Goal
I want to convince my audience that being a student is the happiest job in this world by sharing my personal experiment.
2. Introduction
I will describe the context of my part-time job to the audience and tell them to treasure the time of being a student.
3. Thesis Statement
I will tell my audience the frustration I met during my part-time job and the lesson I learned from this experience.
4. Body
A. the introduction of my part-time job
B. the frustration I met during the job
C. the lesson I learned from this experience
5. Conclusion
Working is not something that we can take it easy. It is really hard and I think being a student is the happiest job in this world. I hope all of us can treasure the time of being a student.
A6310 Section B 49482038 張逸瑤 Speech plan No. 1
Speech plan 1 49482038 張逸瑤
Topic: I'm the luckiest second child
1. How relevant will the audience find this material to be?
Some people would have the concept that being a second child is miserable. I want to let my audience know that not all the second children are miserable. I think some of my classmates are also the second children in their family, so maybe they have the same feelings as me.
2. How can I make it easier for audience members to comprehend the information I will share?
I will use my personal experience to tell my audience why I am the luckiest second child. First, I will talk about the misconceptions about the second children. Then, I will use my own experience to prove that not all second children are miserable.
3. What common ground do audience members share with each other and with me?
Some of my classmates might be the second child like me. If they are not, they might hear something bad or good about being a second child from their siblings or friends who are the second children.
4. What can I do to enhance my credibility?
I will give my experience as example. I am the second child in my family, so people will understand my feelings and believe what I say.
5. What is my audience's initial attitude toward my speech topic likely to be?
I think my audience will have interests in my topic, because I talk about something different from their concepts.
6. What language or cultural differences do audience members have with each other and with me?
Because English is not our mother language, I will try to use the simple words, phrases and sentences to make my audience understand what I say.
Speech outline
Specific goal: I would like the audience to know I am the luckiest second child.
Introduction:
I. People's concepts about the second children
II. Being a second child, I have different ideas about the second children.
Thesis statement: I never thought that I am miserable; on the contrary, I feel lucky and pride to be a second child.
Body:
I. I want to break the myth of the misery of being a second child.
A. my feelings of being a second child
B. what I experienced is different from those people who has those misconception
II. My experiences
A. the relationship between my older sister and me
B. the love of my father and my grandmother
Conclusion: I never think that I am different from my sibling. We all have our parents' love. We are all the same. I think the birth order is not important. How people look upon this world and their attitudes toward life are more important. I have no such trouble of being a second child. I think that I really a lucky person. Therefore, I can speak out loudly that I'm the luckiest second child in the world.
2007年10月29日 星期一
A6310 SectionB 49482008 王怡心 Speech plan
Topic: My experience of joining color guard
1. How relevant will the audience find this material
to be?
I think everyone has special memories in senior high
school times, and one might recall his/her senior high
school days when I share my experience.
2. How can I make it easier for audience members to
comprehend the information I will share?
I would use simple words to describe my experiences
and describe my experiences vividly.
3. What common ground do audience members share with
each other and with me?
My audiences could share their memories with each
other and me.
4. What I can do to enhance my credibility?
I would describe my experiences in detail as possible,
and provide a book as well as DVDs.
5. What is my audience's initial attitude toward my
speech topic likely to be?
They might be interested in my experience of color
guard or they might recall something special in their
senior high.
6. What language or culture differences do audience
members have with each other and with me?
Since my audiences are English majors, it would be
easy for them to understand me as long as I express my
idea correctly and smoothly.
Speech outline
Specific goal: I want to share my experience of color
guard with my audiences since it is wonderful.
Introduction
Ⅰ. I joined color guard in my senior high school and
had a special chance to go to Japan to perform.
Ⅱ. I found Japanese people were polite and had a
wonderful performance.
Ⅲ. Never did I regret to join color guard.
Thesis statement
In each stage of life, one should try hard to work on
something special and leave good memories. It might
take one lots of time to finish it but it would turn
out to be wonderful and memorable in the end. Making
oneself busy is better than doing nothing, leaving
time flying away.
Body
Ⅰ. Japanese people were really polite.
A. Hotel workers stood in front of the hotel to
say goodbye.
B. Japanese students welcomed us in the rain.
Ⅱ. I got a special and interesting performance in
Universal Studio Japan.
(大阪環球影城)
Ⅲ. I prepared a short Japanese introduction and make
Japanese people think I can speak Japanese well.
Conclusion
I feel happy that I jumped at the chance to join color
guard. It is an unforgettable memory for me. Although
it is tiring when practicing, it is worthwhile.
A6310 Section A 49482004 江則潔 Speech Plan No.1
Speech Plan
Topic: sharing my scary experiences
1. How relevant will the audience find this material to be?
All of my classmates had attended the camping we held for welcoming the fresh men, so I think it is a subject relevant to all of us.
2. How can I make it easier for audience members to comprehend the information I will share?
I have to use simple and clear words which are familiar to audience. And try to think if I were the audience will I understand the information completely?
3. What common ground do audience members share with each other and with me?
We all love to hear ghost stories or anything thrilling and exciting, most of all, no one don't love stories.
4. What I can do to enhance my credibility?
Though people usually don't believe in what I said, I think as long as I speak firmly and with firm facial expression, I still can earn their trust.
5. What is my audience's initial attitude toward my speech topic likely to be?
I think they might interest in it because my topic is appealing enough.
6. What language or culture differences do audience members have with each other and with me?
I think there are no differences between all of us.
Outline
Speech goal: I want to make my audience interest in and be entertained by my stories.
Introduction:
A. I am a daring person but I can still be scared by something.
B. recently, there are many scary stories happened to me and I am going to tell two of them.
Thesis statement: I am a daring person but I can still be scared by something.
Body:
І. The first story
A. It happened during the camping I attended.
B. I was very happy to disguise as a ghost and what I did as a ghost.
C. Someone told me an impossible thing after the camping.
D. I was very scared.
П. The second story
A. It happened in this summer in
B. The specialty about the toilet there.
C. I was stuck in the darkness in the toilet.
Conclusion:
Though my stories don't have any profound meanings, I still want to share with my audience.