2008年1月2日 星期三

A6310 Section B 尤雅惠 49482029 Speech Plan No.3 revised

Audience Adaptation Plan
1. Audience analysis: Almost all my audience is from university, and according to my interview to many college students, they really sleep very late. Thus, I think this situation is very serious and I want them to understand more about this issue.
2. Background knowledge: In fact, even though staying up is a common failing among college students, they all know that staying up is not good for health.
3. Creating and maintaining interest: I will start with two rhetorical questions to let them think to themselves. Moreover, I put some interesting and provoking pictures to attract my audience's attention.
4. Organization: I will begin with the definition of staying up, the introduction of the bad habit—staying up, the six main disadvantages of staying up, the supplements for staying up, and then the conclusion.
5. Building credibility: I found some studies from the Net, and I also did a little study myself—I asked fifty college students about their sleeping habit. I will mention and cite my sources during my speech.
6. Motivation: I strongly recommend my audience that staying up is a bad habit; try their best not to do it.
Speech--Outline
Topic: Staying up is harmful to our health.
Specific goal: I want my audience to understand that staying up is not healthy.
Introduction:
I. How many of you really understand the definition of staying up?
II. How many of you have the habit of staying up late?
III. Do you really understand the disadvantages of staying up late?
Thesis statement: People should not stay up because staying up would cause many disadvantages.
Body
I. The definition of staying up.
A. According to Ms.賴姿吟, a doctor of traditional Chinese medicine, going to bed over 11 pm at night might be considered as staying up.
II. Staying up has become a bad habit among modern people.
A. Generally, college students might not go to sleep until 12, or even later..
B. Some people work very hard, for example, working overtime. Thus, they go to sleep late.
C. Some children sleep late because their parents sleep late, according to the news,〈補習、看電視、打電動想早睡也難〉, in Chinatimes on October 3 of 2007.
III. Disadvantages of staying up.
A. About health
i. The first disadvantage—headache.
ii. The second disadvantage—liver becomes worse.
iii. The third disadvantage—the decline of immune system.
iv. The fourth disadvantage—the decline of fertility.
v. The fifth disadvantage—the increase of the possibility of suffering chronic diseases.
B. About energy
i. Staying up would waste energy because people would turn on
the light, computer, TV all night long.
C. About relationship with others
i. Disputes with others who people live with because of different life style.
ii. Staying up would make people get mad easily, so they tend to lose their temper.
D. About the day after staying up.
i. People would have bad mood because they do not sleep well.
ii. People cannot concentrate their work or learning.
IV. Advantages of going to bed early.
A. Stay healthy.
B. Saving energy.
C. Good relationship with others.
D. Have a good spirit the next day.
V. Therefore, try your best not to stay up.
Sources:
吳于珊 (2007103)。〈補習、看電視、打電動 想早睡也難〉。中國時報。
瑟琳娜 ( 2007410 )。〈熬夜族健康生活攻略〉。健康100電子報。
http://epaper.pchome.com.tw/archive/last.htm?s_date=old&s_dir=20070410&s_code=0046&s_cat=
歐陽英 (2007329)。〈熬夜的危害〉。歐陽英樂活生機網。
陳德如 (20051月日 ) 。〈熬夜不利健康〉。大紀元。


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