2008年1月9日 星期三

A6310 SectionA 49482012 陳亭縈 Speech Plan No.3

Persuasive Speech                   Section A   49482012    陳亭縈
Speech Title: Bottled Water-Pure Drink or Pure Hype?
Adaptation Plan
Audience Attitude:
I interviewed ten people in my class, including 5 males and 5 females to understand their shopping habit in bottled water. Over half of them considered that bottled water was expensive, but they would still purchase plastic bottle water. Most of them revealed that they had no ideas about the waste of plastic bottle, and they'd never thought of the problem that bottled water required large expenditure economically and environmentally.
 
Reasons:
According to the sources, I find that three reasons that we should reduce the number of purchasing bottled water are that the cost of manufacturing, delivering, and recycling bottled water is extremely high, that bottled water contains part of tap water, and that bottled water is not indeed safe, pure, and healthy as its commercial says.
 
Selecting an Organization to Meet Audience Needs:
Most of my audience takes purchasing bottled water for granted, and the audience is not aware of the harming that caused by bottled water. So I will use a logical reason approach to convince my audience that they should reduce purchasing bottled water.
 
Outline
Speech Goal:
I want to convince members of my audience that they should avoid and reduce purchasing bottled water if they have the other choice of tap water.
 
Introduction
I.         More and more people prefer to drink bottled water, instead of tap water.
II.      The global bottled water consumption is getting larger and larger.
A.     Bottled water is the best seller among other beverage, including coffee, tea, and carbonated soft drinks.
B.     In 2000 and 2006, the United States is the biggest bottled water consumer among other countries, although the United States has good and safe municipal sources of tap water.
 
Thesis Statement:
There are three reasons for not purchasing bottled water: it cost much in manufacturing, delivery, and recycling, part of bottled water is from tap water, and bottled water will also harm people's health.
 
Body
I.         Compared with municipal water, the cost of bottled water is extremely high.
A.     The plastic bottles are made from fossil fuels.
1.      In the U.S., annually manufacturing 29 billion plastic bottles used for water requires the equivalent of more than 17 million barrel of crude oil.
B.     The bottled water is delivered within long distance, which has wasted much oil.
1.      It would cost much when the products of bottled water are from foreign countries.
2.      While the delivery of tap water costs less than a penny a gallon, bottled water costs several dollars a gallon.
    C. There are 86 percent of used water bottles in the U.S. which is not recycled.
II.      Part of the bottled water is from municipal water, and with added mineral or vitamin.
A. The price of bottled water per gallon is much more expensive than the price of tap water per gallon.
A.     The big company, PEPSI and Coke agree to reveal sources of the bottled water products, and nearly 24% of the bottled water is from tap water.
B. Some products of bottled water stress on specialty water which may harm people's bodies if taking too much.
III.    Bottled water will also harm our health, and it's not as safe, pure, and healthy as what its commercial promised.
A.     The material of plastic bottles is PET (聚對苯二甲酸乙二醇酯) which is extract from crude oil.
B.     The chemical composition will produce toxic molecule while being exposure to sun for a long time.
 
Conclusion
I.         People can bring there own containers which can be used in many times, instead of buying bottled water with plastic containers.
II.      The resources we saved can be used in improving the municipal water systems of many poor countries.
 
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