2008年1月8日 星期二

Section B 49482048 呂星慧 Speech Plan3 Persuasive Speech

Persuasive speech

You should quit drinking sweetened beverage 49482048 呂星慧

Audience Adaptation Plan

1. Audience attitude: Nowadays, more people are fond of drinking beverages rather than water. And I

know some of my audiences have a habit of drinking beverage. While few of them know that most

beverages they buy are sweetened beverage which will bring many disadvantages to their health and

environment. Therefore, I will focus on drinking sweetened beverage's disadvantages to convince them that

they should quit drinking sweetened beverage.

2. Reasons: I will give three reasons that I think are most convincible to audience that drinking sweetened

beverage is really harmful. Drinking sweetened beverage is a wasteful spending and will pollute out

environment. And the most important is it dose harm to your health.

3. Selecting an organization to meet audience needs: On the basis of most my audience's attitude

toward the topic, I will use logical arguments form sign to meet audience needs. I will provide evidence

about the disadvantages resulted form drinking sweetened beverage to support my claim that people should

quit drinking it.

Outline

Speech goal: I want to convince my audience that they should quit drinking

sweetened beverage.

Introduction:

I. According to statistics of the increasing density of Taiwanese café and of Soochow University's research, I

infer that more people are fond of drinking beverage as their major water content rater than drinking water.

II. However, few people know most beverages they buy are sweetened beverages which bring them a lot of

disadvantages.

III. I have personal experience that I used to drinking a beverage per day for years; while since I quit it, my

health and skin is much better than before.

Thesis statement: There are three good reasons for not drinking sweetened beverage which not only is a

wasteful spending but also pollutes our environment and harms your health.

Body:

I. Drinking sweetened beverage is really a wasteful spending.

A. Although the average price sounds cheap, but actually its price is about half of a box lunch's price.

1. I did a survey for 15 male college students shows the outcome that they spend about NT800 per

month on beverage.

II. The second reason that you should quit drinking sweetened beverage is that its containers will pollute our

environment.

A. There are many kinds of beverage's containers.

B. Recently, Styrofoam glass springs up in Taiwanese café.

1. According to資源回收基管會's information, there are four problems of using Styrofoam glass.

2. Most Styrofoam in Taiwan is intermixed with non-recyclable garbage.

a. If Styrofoam are conducted as non-recyclable garbage, it will bring some problems.

III. Drinking sweetened beverage will harm your health.

A. Sweeten beverage will threatens your oral health.

1. Increase the possibilities of having cavities.

2. From American Association of Dental Research pointed out that sweeten beverage will soften our

dental hard tissues.

3. Hong Kong Health Journal also stated that sweetened beverage will yellow your teeth.

B. Drinking sweetened beverage will get fat.

1. Form two famous experts' comment, we can know that getting fat has strong relationship with

drinking sweetened beverage.

2. The reason why sweetened beverage will let you get fat is hormones.

Conclusion

From those reasons, you should think over before drinking sweetened beverage. For your money, health

and our environment's sakes, you should quit it.

Sources

http://e-info.org.tw/node/27567環境資訊中心

http://news.yam.com/chinatimes/politics/200709/20070924775064.html資源回收基管會

http://61.218.233.198/journal/kgc/08/0811.htm 綠色座標環保之聲季刊

http://www.ada.org/prof/resources/topics/science_soda_erosion.asp 2006 American Association of Dental Research meeting in Orlando

http://www.hk.healthjournal.org/ver2/lifestyle.asp?vol=68 Hong Kong Health Journal

http://www.cnn.com/2007/HEALTH/diet.fitness/09/18/kd.liquid.calories/index.html CNN.com health news

東吳大學學生飲用飲料調查生命科學導論期末報告指導老師:黃顯宗教授

報告人:李曉薇 黃惠萱 李依潔 陳宥均 浦虹淇


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