Persuasive speech
You should quit drinking sweetened beverage 49482048 呂星慧
Audience Adaptation Plan
1. Audience attitude: Nowadays, more people are fond of drinking beverages rather than water. And I
know some of my audiences have a habit of drinking beverage. While few of them know that most
beverages they buy are sweetened beverage which will bring many disadvantages to their health and
environment. Therefore, I will focus on drinking sweetened beverage's disadvantages to convince them that
they should quit drinking sweetened beverage.
2. Reasons: I will give three reasons that I think are most convincible to audience that drinking sweetened
beverage is really harmful. Drinking sweetened beverage is a wasteful spending and will pollute out
environment. And the most important is it dose harm to your health.
3. Selecting an organization to meet audience needs: On the basis of most my audience's attitude
toward the topic, I will use logical arguments form sign to meet audience needs. I will provide evidence
about the disadvantages resulted form drinking sweetened beverage to support my claim that people should
quit drinking it.
Outline
Speech goal: I want to convince my audience that they should quit drinking
sweetened beverage.
Introduction:
I. According to statistics of the increasing density of Taiwanese café and of
infer that more people are fond of drinking beverage as their major water content rater than drinking water.
II. However, few people know most beverages they buy are sweetened beverages which bring them a lot of
disadvantages.
III. I have personal experience that I used to drinking a beverage per day for years; while since I quit it, my
health and skin is much better than before.
Thesis statement: There are three good reasons for not drinking sweetened beverage which not only is a
wasteful spending but also pollutes our environment and harms your health.
Body:
I. Drinking sweetened beverage is really a wasteful spending.
A. Although the average price sounds cheap, but actually its price is about half of a box lunch's price.
1. I did a survey for 15 male college students shows the outcome that they spend about NT800 per
month on beverage.
II. The second reason that you should quit drinking sweetened beverage is that its containers will pollute our
environment.
A. There are many kinds of beverage's containers.
B. Recently, Styrofoam glass springs up in Taiwanese café.
1. According to資源回收基管會's information, there are four problems of using Styrofoam glass.
2. Most Styrofoam in
a. If Styrofoam are conducted as non-recyclable garbage, it will bring some problems.
III. Drinking sweetened beverage will harm your health.
A. Sweeten beverage will threatens your oral health.
1. Increase the possibilities of having cavities.
2. From American Association of Dental Research pointed out that sweeten beverage will soften our
dental hard tissues.
3. Hong Kong Health Journal also stated that sweetened beverage will yellow your teeth.
B. Drinking sweetened beverage will get fat.
1. Form two famous experts' comment, we can know that getting fat has strong relationship with
drinking sweetened beverage.
2. The reason why sweetened beverage will let you get fat is hormones.
Conclusion
From those reasons, you should think over before drinking sweetened beverage. For your money, health
and our environment's sakes, you should quit it.
Sources
• http://e-info.org.tw/node/27567環境資訊中心
• http://news.yam.com/chinatimes/politics/200709/20070924775064.html資源回收基管會
• http://61.218.233.198/journal/kgc/08/0811.htm 綠色座標環保之聲季刊
• http://www.ada.org/prof/resources/topics/science_soda_erosion.asp 2006 American Association of Dental Research meeting in
• http://www.hk.healthjournal.org/ver2/lifestyle.asp?vol=68 Hong Kong Health Journal
• http://www.cnn.com/2007/HEALTH/diet.fitness/09/18/kd.liquid.calories/index.html CNN.com health news
• 東吳大學學生飲用飲料調查生命科學導論期末報告指導老師:
• 報告人:李曉薇 黃惠萱 李依潔 陳宥均 浦虹淇
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